Logo criticism

Bloemfontein

New Member
Help me improve this, what needs to be done?

dan4omgjordfrslag.png


and yes it's a cleaning services company. Most cleaning services company logos look very cheap and my goal is to get it into the trends. So please help me steer this.
 

PixelPusher

Super Moderator
Staff member
I would fix the kerning in "services" so the letters are not touching one another, and even it out in "cleaning". Try reducing the height on the house graphic, and you might be able to incorporate the "l" in cleaning with the chimney?
 

Fireproofgfx

New Member
Design it in Illustrator and save it as an EPS file. Illustrator is the only "true" vector program because it uses calculation for each pixel where Photoshop, paint, and gimp do not.


You can test this theory by making a Red circle with 1px Black Stroke in Illustrator and any other program and then Zoom in and watch which one stays "true"
 

ian

Administrator
Staff member
I would not use a full house image
I would get rid of the empty space, below the cse cleaning and also above it, up to the base of the rooftop, it looks too big.
 

kremo5le

Member
This is an interesting logo. I think it is fantastically simple: I love that aspect. What I'm a bit uncomfortable with is the size of the house. I think text should be the main "thing" while the house should be secondary. Have you thought of a smaller house with text and the a logo with the house and just an acronym?
 

Bloemfontein

New Member
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Thank you. House is still too big perhaps, but I don't really know how to give it a nice finish. Vectorising this thing was hard believe it or not I hate illustrator.
 

akwildshots

New Member
Use a darker blue. It looks fine now but if its viewed in print under brighter light ??? Not much darker just help show a clearer definition between white and blue.
 

stumartin

New Member
how about keeping the 'cse', keeping the size of the house, but dropping the services below the 'cleaning', left aligned but ending before the 'g'. Would be a nice typographic logo encased in the vector house...
 

che09

New Member
What I'm a bit uncomfortable with is the size of the house.

I'm also not comfortable with the size of the house!

Have you thought of a smaller house with text and the a logo with the house and just an acronym

Give this one a thought! It's a good idea!
 

jumpingspider

New Member
Help me improve this, what needs to be done?

dan4omgjordfrslag.png


and yes it's a cleaning services company. Most cleaning services company logos look very cheap and my goal is to get it into the trends. So please help me steer this.


I,myself isn't comfortable on the size of the house! Thus,I would like to know if you could update us on the latest development on this!
 
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