What do your think about the following LandingPage?

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  1. Hansi22

    Hansi22 New Member


    what do you think about the following LandingPage
  2. chrishirst

    chrishirst Well-Known Member Staff Member

    If you intend us to actually 'review' the 'experience of the 'page';

    1: Get rid of the ridiculous "pop-up"/overlay because it 'breaks' the WHOLE PURPOSE of a 'landing page' and prevents anyone from giving a true impression of a 'landing page'

    2: That is NOT a 'landing page' (in the marketing use of the phrase). While it is a page that a visitor might 'land on'. It is however worded as if it were the 'about us' document on a website.

    as a design: 8 out of 10

    as a marketing page, 0 out of 10.
  3. Kit_Pantelope

    Kit_Pantelope New Member

    Hi my name is Kit. First time posting here. Chrishirst - agree with his comments. Would only give it a 6 out of 10 though for design. and a 2 out of 10 for marketing. At least both of our numbers add up to 8...right?
    • Not a fan of big headers full of whitespace - it doesn't really provide any value to the user and it's not beautiful.
    • It seems as if your English is off in a lot of places.
    • You do 3-d visualizations, but the rest of your landing page is about Marketing...in Boston?
    • Also the clients you have logos of, the quotes aren't from them - there's not connection and it's a design disconnect
    • The map provides no additional value, not even as a contact.
    I would recommend going back to basic marketing - who is your target market, what do they want, where is you traffic coming from, what is their buying state, etc, and address those things with a cohesive message and design.

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