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[ssyed]

Hi ,

I have just become an agent for a web commercial production company. I have put up a website as a landing page for my customers. Please can you review and give feedback. Specifically I am looking for:

1) Does the site look business enough to use for companies
2) Is there too little or too much content
3) Do you think the color scheme is reasonable
4) Is the business opportunity section obvious enough

http://www.web-mercials.biz

Thanks for your kind help

 

[StephanieCordray]

1) Does the site look business enough to use for companies
Yes and no. I think what you have chosen works well enough, however, the images are not very clear or crisp.
2) Is there too little or too much content
You could reduce the content quite a bit and still say the same things.
3) Do you think the color scheme is reasonable
Yes
4) Is the business opportunity section obvious enough

No... I had to really look to understand there is a business opportunity.

 

[ian]

1. Yes, but I dont think the two banners at the bottom of the page are appropriate for an ecommerce business site.
2. I personally am of the opinion that the homepage should have not as much content, with a clear navigation and the majority of the content on sub pages. So I would say yes, too much.
3. Color scheme looks good.
4. No, important that at a glance, visitors of the site can figure out what it is all about. I could not do that easily.