Hey not too shabby!
But there are somethings that I noticed. The image in the top area
http://www.allbabyadvice.com/images/stories/baby_pictures/home/trunki_detail.jpg is a bit fuzzy.
Title is a bit long and wordy with keywords. I'd look into the rules of the Title and see if that kind of setup is going to help or hurt.
http://www.highrankings.com/allabouttitles
This tag should not be so keywords.
<meta name="description" content="All Baby Advice for mums and dads on pregnancy and labour, maternity clothes, bottle feeding, breastfeeding, weaning, sleeptime, playtime, bathtime, prams, car seats, travelling, baby health and safety tips." />
That's not a good "Description" that we would use. Think of it like. You run into a friend and tell them about your website and what it has to offer. You would not say it that way.
http://www.seoconsultants.com/articles/1007/meta-description.asp
When looking at this page...
http://www.allbabyadvice.com/index.php/star-baby-products.html
The text is just too hard to read. I don't think that's helping at all. Try using Dark Green.
BIG NO NO
http://www.allbabyadvice.com/index.php/shop-with-us.html
It's full of affiliate programs. You should try and keep the visitors on your website and not send away. Maybe add top products to your site to sell?
As for the text on this page ..
http://www.allbabyadvice.com/index.php/join-our-network.html
It's not all matching and now it's black text. Maybe black text would be best on all pages but don't mix and max and change with each page.
Good luck!
