Please review my modified sites

[klein]

hi good day!

What could I add/ do to make it a better experience? the site is Local and Wide Network Support - Nmnetworksolutions.net and
Ready made web site for rent at Rent-your-website.org

thanks!

 

[ian]

the nmnetworksolutions site the flash took a long time to load, otherwise it looks ok. The second site, the header area looks a little on the large side.
You may also want to check your grammar on the websites.