Opinions on "kung fu" flashwebsite please?

[tamazcalo]

Hi everyone

I'm a webdesign student who's new to this forum.
Latest assignment involves making a flashwebsite around a kung fu filmfestival
i am quite unhappy with my design so far, but maybe i've been looking at it too much recently.

Do you happen to have any tips forum?

(kanji's are not correct, these will be replaced with correct sentences)


Greetings from belgium!

 

[che09]

I find your work great! You've done good as a start!

but maybe i've been looking at it too much recently.

Might be. you've been looking at it too much!

 

[dub_designer]

Can you post up your image as a screen shot in a browser so can see the final layout?

First critique....make "Enter the Dragon" red....it was one of the last things I saw while looking around and I imagine you'd want that seen a lot sooner.

 

[Mug]

The design is ace. I agree with dub_designer though you should colour the "enter the dragon" text and/or make it bigger.

 

[mrandrei]

Very creative design. How I wish I can view the flash file, so I can comment on its loading time, etc.