My website/Portfolio
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It grows on me the more I look at it. Nonetheless, I will give you some critique:
I was kind of hoping the menu ("home" etc.) would light up to the colours on the outside.
You should remove the black line from the top, and maybe put it on the bottom of the menu. You could also make the header completely black, as it needs to be differentiated from the content.
Grammatical error: "a experienced" -> "an experienced"
The hill thing adds a lot of colour, which you should keep. But you should make it smaller, and put your small bio next to it.
I was kind of hoping the menu ("home" etc.) would light up to the colours on the outside.
You should remove the black line from the top, and maybe put it on the bottom of the menu. You could also make the header completely black, as it needs to be differentiated from the content.
Grammatical error: "a experienced" -> "an experienced"
The hill thing adds a lot of colour, which you should keep. But you should make it smaller, and put your small bio next to it.
jnspire
New Member
I Love It!
You have a gorgeous and sleek design which both draws my attention and lures me forward... The only thing which I would suggest would be more user interaction. For instance, Maybe a splash of flash, java script, or an animation.
Not much... maybe even just some very simple rollovers.
Other wise I would say Grade A!
Thanks for sharing!
You have a gorgeous and sleek design which both draws my attention and lures me forward... The only thing which I would suggest would be more user interaction. For instance, Maybe a splash of flash, java script, or an animation.
Not much... maybe even just some very simple rollovers.
Other wise I would say Grade A!
Thanks for sharing!
TheLivingDead
New Member
You do GREAT work!
clean, well organized, unique, easy to navigate, easy on the eyes---
A+
clean, well organized, unique, easy to navigate, easy on the eyes---
A+
