My second shot

[Duke Nukem]

Hi its me again. My supertechtips.info site is now online and I have another site in progress, its http://1delacruz.info and it is about making money. So why don't you guys take a look and criticize my site(s). I would like to know specifically if I have the correct placing of ads on my site. Thanks and have a nice day.

 

[ian]

The site looks alright, but I dont like the ad at the very top of the page.

 

[fairdoes]

Infopreneurship as a word in the title tag of your main page is not helping your search engine referals! No-one will search for this word. The title of each page wants to have words that help your search engine placement, and as few other words as possible.

There's one typo in the main page - a seperating hyphen needs spaces (like this example)! I mean the 'mowing the lawn' part.

The overall appearance is good, professional and easy to read.

A writeup from satisfied customers would lend tons of credibility.

 

[Duke Nukem]

Ah yes... Thank you very much!! I'll be changing the title right now.