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Amnar69

New Member
Hello,

This is my website, is still under construction (my work don't leave me much time
for his completion) but is over at 95%.

I want to get work by myself as freelance designer and programmer (i'm a programmer, not a web designer, but i like to design sites :)..

Probably there are plenty grammar error, i'm sorry, i really will fix them as fast :)

Thank you in advance..
 
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kayla

New Member
Until both your HTML and CSS are valid, I would remove the W3C buttons from the very bottom. Someone that might now understand valid code (maybe a prospective client) might click them not knowing what they are, see all these errors (even if they don't know what they mean), and not hire you. Just a though.
 
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Quasha

New Member
Actually I love your work. Very much good and simple work. The sky blue looks preety and really good work.
 
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Amnar69

New Member
Thank you :)

i removed the links (Icons are still there, but dont work as link), and i will make it work again when i fix all the errors.. Problem is that somewhere i use CSS3, so the site for sure will not be W3C compliant (CSS3 is not actually an approved standard right? I would'nt make a mistake :)
 
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Pheno

New Member
It isn't valid XHTML.

If you're hoping to sell to native English speakers you would benefit from having a native English speaker adjust the language - a lot of the grammar could be greatly improved.
 
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Amnar69

New Member
Some material are not original, this is why i wrote "Copyright © 2011 Filip Janiszewski and respective owners", i will wrote my personal one as a final step, now i want to have a general working model..

As i told, my work grab from me a lot of time and resource, so i have to speed-up with some small expedient.. As i wrote somewhere, you guys are the first people who see my site (ok ok, i also signed in also to another webdesign comunity), so be clement for this kind of mistakes..
 
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JackRT

New Member
I like the site... the blue is a little too light since you're also using white background, imho.

The language change does not impact some of the tabs like start etc...
 
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Amnar69

New Member
Yeah, i noticed that increasing the contrast between the elements may improve the visual effect, i will look for some cue as fast.... About the translation, there is no easy way to translate "Start" in Italian without losing the meaning, i leave what i consider well know term in the original language..
 
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Phreaddee

Super Moderator
Staff member
hi everyone is patting you on the back, bravo.

I however noticed something a little odd, first of all you write
We have the knowledge to optimise your pages for the best search engine results,
Click to expand...
so therefore where is your h1? actually any header styles.
where is your <p> styles sorry there are 2 - one for the copyright notice and the other for the validator logos.
what about a description meta tag instead because as I suspected when searched on google (you know the main search engine your apparently optimising for best results for) it has searched for the first <p> tag to place in the description section (as you didnt write a description meta tag) which of course is the copyright notice....

ALSO
all your css is within the document...
there is a closed div right at the beginning of your body.
and in all honesty the design isn't that fantastic. I don't like it.
this is far from a professional website.
 
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