Average Joe's Comparisons (reviews of items for men)

[selles2011]

This is a website I have made with a few friends as a small project during college, we review and compare products that we own. The products include things most men care about (NERF, Zippo, P90X ect) and is written in a more sarcastic and less pretentious tone. I was just wondering if you all could give me some advise and maybe include first impressions, and what you like/dislike.

This is my first website and not exactly sure what works. So please, any and all comments are welcome.

Here is the link: Average Joe's Comparisons

 

[benjamin.morgan]

I personally think the headings should be aligned left. averagejoescomparisons.weebly.com/comparisons2.html

 

[selles2011]

Yeah I meant to fix that. Thank you for reminding me. I agree it looks bad to have one page center with every other page aligned left

 

[AsheSkyler]

Love the Mark Twain quote. Women's product sites could learn a thing or two from yours, starting with the lack of pink.

My complaints regard punctuation. On the About page, you forgot two periods. On the Manly Books page you forgot an apostrophe in "man's". A few commas were missing here and there, but most people don't care about commas.

 

[chrishirst]

My complaints regard punctuation. On the About page, you forgot two periods.

There's a joke in there, but as a mere male I'll try to ignore it.

A few commas were missing here and there, but most people don't care about commas.

Hey! You speak for yourself, I prefer to take the odd breath when reading something.

 

[selles2011]

Thanks for the feedback

 

[AsheSkyler]

@ chrishirst:
I had a long debate with myself on mentioning the periods for that reason.
I'm a bit of a comma-liker too. Drove some of my composition teachers nuts.

 

[chrishirst]

Yeah, having a "Full stop" at the end of a sentence is much less "open to interpretation".

 

[selles2011]

So good website?

 

[chrishirst]

So good website?

Well, I had to move back from my monitors by a foot or so to NOT feel that I was being slapped in the face by a green lighter.