Nice or needs improvement?

RPDesign

New Member
I like the colour scheme and layout of site, however a few things you need to fix are:
Top right corner where the twitter link is, the writing "twitter" is currently underneath the icon and hard to see, it needs to be moved next to it.

Underneath the "home" link, the link to "money tips" should be a different colour as it is hard to see.

On the right hand side where you have put "share the freebie love", underneath the picture, you can still see the HTML coding,where I think a link is supposed to be, so also needs to be fixed.


All of these are minor changes and won't take long to fix. As I said overall I like the site colour scheme, it matches perfectly your aim and audience.
You just need to fix these things and it will be great.
 

d a v e

New Member
the finding mom bit of the logo looks a bit dodgy - some of the black looks poorly anti-aliased

the fully justified loks awful in places (e.g. the smoothie from macdonalds bit) - use left aligned.

a bit more room above each header would help the section the page a little more

narrowing the left column by about say 15-25px would give improve it and give you a slightly shorter line length and help readability

don't forget your favicon -always easier to find sites again

have you tried the grab this freebie in reverse colours i.e. white on hot pink/coral/er bright salmon ?

otherwise, good job!
 

reverseengineer

New Member
looks great. I suggest that you stretch the background (the white part) down more(5-10px) so the grey horizontal line is lined up with the menu. Also very top menu isn't centered and I think it would look better that way. This is a legit design, seriously, good job.
 

Phreaddee

Super Moderator
Staff member
On the right hand side where you have put "share the freebie love", underneath the picture, you can still see the HTML coding,where I think a link is supposed to be, so also needs to be fixed.

actually, I believe you share the freebie love by copy n pasting the code. it is not an error.

I agree tho that the justified text does not work and left aligned would look nicer.
 
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