website-design made by beginner

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d a v e

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without sounding uncharitable - they look unfinished

let me take the teeth whitening as an example

your nav list still has the bullet points showing

if you have margins between paragraphs then you don't need indents at the beginnig of a line
text is too small, needs more line-height

the ad at the top looks amateurish

image should be high up the page
no header or logo or anything

lots of code errors

links are default blue

have a look at some of these and google some typography/design/colour sites
 
krymson

krymson

Member
no offense but very poor job, i think its just a place to put your adsense on... no a fan... im sorry :(
 
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