"The Cornish Wall" please review

d a v e

New Member
either use space between paragraphs OR first line indent (but not on the first paragraph of a block of text)

"the Cornish pub and restaurant guide" is poorly antialiased

not keen on the blues - bit cold and not good colours for food - try reds, yellows and/or greens

"Decembers Top Dish “Winters Chicken” two apostrophes missing

can't work out what the favicon is - use one clove of garlic instead

nice header image

nav would be better as real text rather than images


quite nice but the corportate blue spoils it for me

it's also a bit squashed in places - could do with some more padding

text needs more line-height
 
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Phreaddee

Super Moderator
Staff member
Agree with all dave said plus
Three charset definitions. Iso and utf8???
The code is done miserably.
Inline EVERYWHERE, absolute positioning etc.

The only time css is called is like below.
<p class=“normal-P0“><span class=“normal-C3“>text</span></p>
Not only is excessive and not needed and incredibly unsemantic, but it makes no sense either...

If this is your work, try to work on getting it neater, if you employed a “professional“ to do this they should know better...

Design 6/10
Typography 6/10
Code 2/10
Technique 2/10

Overall below par.
 
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