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ian

Administrator
Staff member
I would get rid of the border around the walwala.com text logo, would also try and make the various sections of the site have a common theme.
 

tenthheron

New Member
Ummm...your site is pretty strange. In good ways and in bad ways.

First, lose the border around the logo. That's gotta go right away.

Second, the tag line "Biggest Entertainment Portal That You Ever Seen" is not gramatically correct. It should probably read "The Biggest Entertainment Portal You Have Ever Seen". You could leave off the "The" at the beginning.

Third, your blue home site links to other sites that are WAY more professional looking. Except for the TV site which is terrible. The whole experience is very strange. There are spelling and grammatical errors everywhere, but some of the sites have a very good look to them. And some look quite bad. Overall, I'd say I'm confused.

It looks like an amazing project you're working on though! I hope you do well, and that would really be amazing if it became the biggest entertainment portal on the net.
 
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