Review both of my websites?

Matthew Wilson

New Member
I'd like to ask for no domain response.
I can't do anything about that.

(Truthfully, I am an underage blogger who needs to show my parents the money before I can even think about a domain).

Both links are in the signature.

KeepYourBlog is a blogging motivational website, and this is it's first day out.
The first video (question) is available through YouTube search and my channel, whereas the second is "unlisted," throwing YouTube viewers to my website, and to my ads.

I can only earn money through ads so far, so yeah.

VindictusOnline is a blog about Nexon (a gaming company)'s newest game, Vindictus. I am one of the first ones to create a blog about Vindictus (if not the first), and do plan to get some good response from it.
Maybe not in money, but I know my pageviews and such is doing good. (That blog is not fully motivated by money-making).

If you could tell me what to do to make them better, if you like them, thanks.
 

evocrim

New Member
Too impersonal - no character that I can see.

Surfers are humans - we want human things to play with.
Your sites are cold and uninviting - where's the soul?
 
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