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wilhorse

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Sorry, if I've worn out my welcome, here. LOL I hope y'all aren't sick of me, BUT, I noticed the wp theme I abandon showed up in keyword search results on Google, which tells me wp may be better for SEO.

So, I realize the design is not impressive or fancy, but what do you think of the information on main page? Does it load (not sure if this is the right term) fast enough when you click on a page? What do you think of gallery in "graphic" photos?

http://www.resolvewound.com/sub/

I tried to make a page that is very keyword rich. Overall, what do you think as opposed to this site?

http://resolvewound.com/index.html

Sorry again, if I'm wearing out this site. :)
 

wilhorse

New Member
I can't help but come to the conclusion that you are somewhat a beginner level designer and likely have no intention of selling your web design services. My apologies if that is an incorrect assumption.

That said, if I were you I would look at a better template to get your site off to a much better look with minimal effort-
Check out ElegantThemes.com - 40 bucks.

Example: http://www.elegantthemes.com/demo/?theme=eGamer

If you google 'wordpress templates', be careful of the free templates as they often have encrypted footer links.


Well no sh!t! lol I ranch, work cattle, ride colts, and most of all make the best wound formula there is for horses. In all seriousness, thanks for the template tip. If it wasn't for the people on this forum my site would be a joke. It was a terribly functioning yahoo site before I found this forum. This board helped me tremendously, and I can't THANK all of you enough!!! I didn't really even know what wordpress was until I came on here. I had vaguely heard of it, or seen it on blogs. Now, I even have a blog.

I finally got something I'm happy with, mainly because of the keyword ranking, and the content is finally right. It's not very creative, but a nice, clean site.

Here's the latest. http://www.resolvewound.com/
 
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Phreaddee

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Well no sh!t! lol I ranch, work cattle, ride colts, and most of all make the best wound formula there is for horses.
don't worry about shadee, he's trying to prove a point in a childish way in an attempt to regain his wounded ego, because somebody posted that message on his "review my website" thread. I see you handled it with much more grace and respect than it appears he has the capability to do so.
 

webstudent123

New Member
Please re-post link..

Willhorse: unless i'm missing something your main link to the 'sub' directory does not seem to work.

Shadee: HA! PS- Ive got a much more diligent reply that is coming to your thread later tonight in which I will argue every point you have made without utilizing my more aggressive and insulting terminology. In the meantime I would suggest you keep your comments (and mine) that reference your thread, on YOUR thread.
 

wilhorse

New Member
No, webstu, you're not missing anything. A while back I was trying to decide between the weebly site, and wp. At the time, I had built resolvewound.com site in a sub. domain, as not to take down the live site. I'd like for the sub to just fall into a black hole, as it still shows up, at times, in google search. Sorry for the confusion....I went ahead and picked one of those two, which is now the live site.


LOL, I really handled it with grace. hahaha
 
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webstudent123

New Member
Not bad..

The site is certainly a bit heavy on the text. You may want to consider putting some type of call to action on the home page, especially if the main goal of the site is to sell the product.

I would also recommend having some of the images on the homepage. They are dramatic but may also inspire people to stay on the site longer. Hence you may also want to incorporate a basic warning style entry page.

Next I would re-examine the logo- something along these lines:
http://claytonbrowndesigns.com/resolvewoundlogo.png

Edit: I doubt you will, but incase you want to use the logo I just wiped up:
http://www.claytonbrowndesigns.com/resolvewoundhighres.png
http://www.claytonbrowndesigns.com/resolvewoundpsd.PSD
 
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wilhorse

New Member
WoW! That logo looks great! Thank you so much!!! :) I will incorporate this tonight when I have more time. Yes, it is too wordy. I combined the about page, and the directions page, which I think helped the site, but it is full of words.
 

wilhorse

New Member
Well, I thought I'd be able to upload the logo, but there's not an option. I'm going to have to figure out code for this. I looked on the simple theme forum and couldn't find anything. There was a post about centering the logo, but it was completely foreign to me. I'd like the logo on the left. I really think it will add something to the site. Here is the theme I'm using.
http://themes.simplethemes.com/skeleton/topic/logo
 
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