Please Review/Rate my Work

Discussion in 'Graphic Design' started by orangecopper, May 15, 2009.

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  1. orangecopper

    orangecopper New Member

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    Hi all,

    Please rate my work and let me know where i need to improve and how does it look and feel.

    alabiagroup dot com

    regards
    Joshu Thomas
     
    Last edited: May 21, 2009
  2. superdave

    superdave New Member

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    good site,but dont care for the red.
     
  3. priestm

    priestm New Member

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    I say ... Nice work ... Nothing wrong with the red
     
  4. ian

    ian Administrator Staff Member

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    I think the flash animation is rather sparse or bare.
    I think a static image would look better.
     
  5. PixelPusher

    PixelPusher Super Moderator Staff Member

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    Overall not a bad design, but...

    Couple things to note:

    • The flash piece (if you keep it) needs a general frame rate increase, but pause the animation long enough for someone to read the text! It goes by way to quick. Perhaps add a thumbnail bar to provide a little user interaction, allowing them to select one of the [slides]?
    • Be aware of the colors you choose! red is a warm color and blue is the exact opposite, a cold color. Both are also primary colors and they compete with each other. I would choose one or the other.
    • This is a health care company, perhaps a blood red color is not the most appropriate?
    • I like the crystal-like design of the background, try using light grey tones instead. This would put more emphasis on the color/content area of the website. As it stand the bg is a little distracting, needs toning down.

    Good luck.
     
  6. orangecopper

    orangecopper New Member

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    Thankyou all for the review...Sure i will make a note and impliment them.
    Yes, JD you are absolutley right with the color...and this is just due for the first review of the website..will add your inputs and make it look better...thanks for your advices with colors too...

    Best regards
    Joshu Thomas
    OrangeCopper.com
     
  7. sclick

    sclick New Member

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    All my thoughts, nicely stated above, by others, but I do like your site, generally. It's fresh, and I want to read your copy, so slow down the flash. Definitely a great start to a site with much potential. Good luck.
     
  8. wachtn

    wachtn New Member

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    It looks good.
     
  9. Elective

    Elective New Member

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    You've got some excellent work here, congrats.
     
  10. remoteworkmate

    remoteworkmate New Member

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    hi

    the site looks neat actually...although i'm not a big fan of red, its kinda loud color ;) but overall it looks great...
     
  11. Maxchen

    Maxchen New Member

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    the website looks very professional, and really nothing wrong with red ;)
    Good work ))
     

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