need a look over

[Dorky]

i will do the spelling , sentence structure, and grammar before i actually post to my site but i needed some input on what i have and what im missing.

http://docs.google.com/View?id=ds77pd9_17c4v63qcc

 

[mrandrei]

The content is good. Just be careful in the use of punctuations. Some are not used properly.

 

[kolchak]

Do you think grammar is really so important?

 

[jamesparker]

You can check out all the things before submitting or posting!