I Need a Review on My New Website, Thanks Everyone!

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  1. londonmoon

    londonmoon New Member

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    Okay, so I've revitalized my website and banner design for those who need information on blog creation. Content, Content Content: I created or structured it in a way that makes it seem like an E-book. Is this a good idea. Take a look and tell me what you think. Any suggestions? Thanks in advance everyone.

    http://www.howtostartablog.cc/
     
  2. chrishirst

    chrishirst Well-Known Member Staff Member

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    You should rectify the grammatical errors and factual inaccuracies in your first page then I, for one might just take you seriously enough to read past that page .

    And, What on earth does this;

    mean??

    Even when the misspelling is ignored it is just gibberish.

    "each one or at least 10,000" What??? What the hell is that supposed to say?

    to continue:

    Are you ten years of age?? Because that is about the cognitive age you portray in your ramblings. If you WANT to be taken seriously by your peers you need to learn correct English or employ a writer that does.

    You have mastered the ability ... in only 8 years and TEN websites, twenty years and hundreds of successful site you might be part way to being a "master"

    But you cannot claim to be a 'master' of anything, then write like a ten year old with "learning difficulties".


    And yes, you are correct I really do not give a toss if English is your second or third language. If you WANT to be taken seriously by your peers, you need to learn correct English or employ a copy writer that does.
     
  3. lionel.web

    lionel.web Member

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    I didn't read all the text, so i didnt checked the syntax/grammar errors.
    The desing is really simply. That makes it clean.
    Good to have it designed it, with responsive css.
    I think you should make it more attractive with better design.
     
  4. chrishirst

    chrishirst Well-Known Member Staff Member

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    ???

    Are not;

    "The desing is really simply. That makes it clean."

    and;

    "I think you should make it more attractive with better design."

    contradictory?
     
  5. lionel.web

    lionel.web Member

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    I dont think what i said contradictory.
    More attractive and better design doesnt mean, to not to be simply and clean. Or to overload it with items.
    It means to be more modern. This design, is not modern or fresh....
     

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