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tell me what you think about my costumer web site for limousine service in ohio
new web site here
tell me what you think about my costumer web site for limousine service in ohio
new web site here
hey guys tell me what you think
- Thread starter elcape
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Hi, your site is pretty decent, but...
For a chauffeur service site, it would be recommended to spell chauffeur correctly...One of the first things I noticed on the home page was "chaffer" instead of chauffeur. NOT good.
For me personally, misspellings are a pet peeve. I would not book a reservation with a company that cannot spell their service correctly. I am thinking to myself "how can I expect them to pick me up on time if they cannot take the time to run a spell check on their pages?".
For as elegant as the look of the site comes across, the content leaves much to be desired. Okay I've been looking again and I have to say- your site is pretty bad...
i.e. "Our chaffeurs(sp) are professionals that know very well the diferrents(sp) cities and its points of interets(sp) such as hotels, resorts, airports, restaurants, and many more." Your spelling is terrible... Three mistakes in one sentence?!?!
i.e. "Our costumers (sp) that have truts(sp) their transportation needs to us, our first class service and our professionalism are some of the reasons to rely on us." Yikes.
i.e. "We are available 24 hours a day, 365 days of the year to ensure that we provide a quality, on time, safe and reliable Limousine trasportation(sp). We strive to provide an efficient and cost effective service.
Our chauffeurs know the area, that why we can asssure(sp) that our service will be on time, every time, making us the company that you whant(sp) by your side on your business apointments(sp), traveling tp(sp) airports or just a nigth(sp) out in the cities. Whoa. Is this a joke?!?!
First Class Limos
Our fleet of limousines and sedans car are always clean and properly maintaned(sp), well groomed chauffeurs, and professionalism with the treating of the costumer(sp), all of this make our limo service a first class limo service. "Professionals serving professionals". By the way, what is a "costumer"? Is it someone who tries on costumes for a living?!?! Ohhh.... wait- you mean a "customer".
Our Coverage Area
Ohio Car Services serve on the main cities of ohio(Capitalize) and we can there by provide the best geografical(sp) coverage, some of the cities we serve are: Cleveland, Solon, Euclid, Beachwood, Columbus, Akron, Canto, Toledo, Lakewood, Cleveland Heigths, Lakewood, Cuyahoga and sourounding(sp) areas.
Book Your Limo Today!
Book your ride today and experince for yourself why we are the first class limousine company to choose in ohio. You can make a reservation by our reservation form or the quickest way is by calling to our toll free number 866 571 LIMO.
Okay, okay, I give up...
For a chauffeur service site, it would be recommended to spell chauffeur correctly...One of the first things I noticed on the home page was "chaffer" instead of chauffeur. NOT good.
For me personally, misspellings are a pet peeve. I would not book a reservation with a company that cannot spell their service correctly. I am thinking to myself "how can I expect them to pick me up on time if they cannot take the time to run a spell check on their pages?".
For as elegant as the look of the site comes across, the content leaves much to be desired. Okay I've been looking again and I have to say- your site is pretty bad...
i.e. "Our chaffeurs(sp) are professionals that know very well the diferrents(sp) cities and its points of interets(sp) such as hotels, resorts, airports, restaurants, and many more." Your spelling is terrible... Three mistakes in one sentence?!?!
i.e. "Our costumers (sp) that have truts(sp) their transportation needs to us, our first class service and our professionalism are some of the reasons to rely on us." Yikes.
i.e. "We are available 24 hours a day, 365 days of the year to ensure that we provide a quality, on time, safe and reliable Limousine trasportation(sp). We strive to provide an efficient and cost effective service.
Our chauffeurs know the area, that why we can asssure(sp) that our service will be on time, every time, making us the company that you whant(sp) by your side on your business apointments(sp), traveling tp(sp) airports or just a nigth(sp) out in the cities. Whoa. Is this a joke?!?!
First Class Limos
Our fleet of limousines and sedans car are always clean and properly maintaned(sp), well groomed chauffeurs, and professionalism with the treating of the costumer(sp), all of this make our limo service a first class limo service. "Professionals serving professionals". By the way, what is a "costumer"? Is it someone who tries on costumes for a living?!?! Ohhh.... wait- you mean a "customer".
Our Coverage Area
Ohio Car Services serve on the main cities of ohio(Capitalize) and we can there by provide the best geografical(sp) coverage, some of the cities we serve are: Cleveland, Solon, Euclid, Beachwood, Columbus, Akron, Canto, Toledo, Lakewood, Cleveland Heigths, Lakewood, Cuyahoga and sourounding(sp) areas.
Book Your Limo Today!
Book your ride today and experince for yourself why we are the first class limousine company to choose in ohio. You can make a reservation by our reservation form or the quickest way is by calling to our toll free number 866 571 LIMO.
Okay, okay, I give up...
