How come you have the entire body in an iframe? I don't feel like you need that. You should really be able to make that site look good simply by using CSS.
I remember when I first started out 8 years ago. I had something kind of like that as well. You have a loooonng ways to go, but have fun and enjoy the ride.
Hmm... I'm not really liking it. The background is a bit strong and there really isn't much detail for creativity to the site. I would charge maybe $100 for something like that (homepage).
Not bad. You need to have some more movement in the start up though. Since you are making it entirely out of flash I would like to see more going on with some more speed.