My first e-commerce website

AsheSkyler

AsheSkyler

New Member
I think you would greatly benefit from a fixed-width layout.

Use an Unordered List instead of an "amateur" list on the front page.

The navigation needs to be present on all four pages. Most people prefer some kind of hover effect when they mouse over a link, even if it's as simple as an underline.

Perhaps a consistent background throughout the site? Or have the brown blocks at the bottom tiled over the front page's background like on two other pages?

A visitor counter typically belongs in the footer. Most people claim it is outdated, unprofessional, and prefers that one not be displayed at all.
 
Phreaddee

Phreaddee

Super Moderator
Staff member
WOW!
first of all THIS IS NOT AN E-COMMERCE SITE!
second of all it is probably the most garbled code I've ever come across

I cannot tell you how to fix that save from starting over and getting it right!
for a start the most basic of websites ever would be this.

HTML: 
<!DOCTYPE html>
<html>
<head>
<meta charset="UFT-8">
</head>
<body>
</body>
</html>
I'd suggest to start from there.
css and scripts in the head ,
content in body

ashe is correct your nav should be in an ul,
but lets crawl before we can walk! basics...

oh and
Hello i am designing websites
Click to expand...
no your not, you just know how to make an html page (very very badly). There is a big difference.
 
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Sllen Scott

New Member
Looks really cluttered to me. And you need to have some sort of consistency, the inner pages don't seem to follow the design of your home page.
 
krymson

krymson

Member
I dont know exactly what you're doing with your "website" because, I have to assume you dont know how to speak english, because your post and your site grammatically does not make sense... On top of that there really is no design. Coding is horrible. First impression is you're trying to scam people. And if you are trying to scam people at least learn how to read and write english... You're using tables, colors are horrid, nav is horrid, looks like something from AOL 4.0 back in 1996. Welcome to 2012 hire a web designer to build your site you might get away with a few more scams but this wont get you anywhere.

I know what I had to say was not nice but I'm sure others were thinking i just happen to be that one jerk who says what everyone else is thinking... Sorry I don't sugar coat anything.
 
reverseengineer

reverseengineer

New Member
No. Too formal and unprofessional at the same time. Looks very wordpress template-y. Top fold should have a better call to action and lead generator.
 
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jumpingspider

New Member
You need to change a lot of things in there. It doesn't look like an E-commerce site but more of a blog site! Of course you can definitely do better with it.
 
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sidv220

New Member
Very amateur looking. In consistent design on different pages. It will drive the visitors away. Follow AsheSkyler advice.
 
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