Please Review/Rate my Work

orangecopper · 05-15-2009, 06:13 PM

Hi all,

Please rate my work and let me know where i need to improve and how does it look and feel.

alabiagroup dot com

regards
Joshu Thomas

superdave · 05-17-2009, 04:30 AM

good site,but dont care for the red.

priestm · 05-19-2009, 05:01 PM

I say ... Nice work ... Nothing wrong with the red

***ian*** · 05-20-2009, 10:05 AM

I think the flash animation is rather sparse or bare.
I think a static image would look better.

PixelPusher · 05-20-2009, 08:27 PM

Overall not a bad design, but...

Couple things to note:

The flash piece (if you keep it) needs a general frame rate increase, but pause the animation long enough for someone to read the text! It goes by way to quick. Perhaps add a thumbnail bar to provide a little user interaction, allowing them to select one of the [slides]?
Be aware of the colors you choose! red is a warm color and blue is the exact opposite, a cold color. Both are also primary colors and they compete with each other. I would choose one or the other.
This is a health care company, perhaps a blood red color is not the most appropriate?
I like the crystal-like design of the background, try using light grey tones instead. This would put more emphasis on the color/content area of the website. As it stand the bg is a little distracting, needs toning down.

Good luck.

orangecopper · 05-20-2009, 09:09 PM

Thankyou all for the review...Sure i will make a note and impliment them.
Yes, JD you are absolutley right with the color...and this is just due for the first review of the website..will add your inputs and make it look better...thanks for your advices with colors too...

Best regards
Joshu Thomas
OrangeCopper.com

sclick · 05-23-2009, 04:03 AM

All my thoughts, nicely stated above, by others, but I do like your site, generally. It's fresh, and I want to read your copy, so slow down the flash. Definitely a great start to a site with much potential. Good luck.

wachtn · 05-23-2009, 08:04 AM

It looks good.

Elective · 07-11-2009, 12:36 AM

You've got some excellent work here, congrats.

remoteworkmate · 07-21-2009, 01:42 AM

the site looks neat actually...although i'm not a big fan of red, its kinda loud color

but overall it looks great...

05-15-2009, 06:13 PM	#1
orangecopper Gold Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: India Posts: 334	Please Review/Rate my Work Hi all, Please rate my work and let me know where i need to improve and how does it look and feel. alabiagroup dot com regards Joshu Thomas __________________ Best Classifieds ads scripts Best web hosting companies 2011 Wordpress SEO Last edited by orangecopper; 05-21-2009 at 08:01 AM.

05-17-2009, 04:30 AM	#2
superdave New Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arkansas Posts: 15	good site,but dont care for the red. __________________ http://guardianwebdesign.sitepages.org/ your web-based solution

05-19-2009, 05:01 PM	#3
priestm New Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 5	I say ... Nice work ... Nothing wrong with the red __________________ Cheers~ http://www.bluefutures.com http://www.efuturesmarket.com

05-20-2009, 10:05 AM	#4
*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,056	I think the flash animation is rather sparse or bare. I think a static image would look better. __________________ Camera Forum - Computer Forum

05-20-2009, 08:27 PM	#5
PixelPusher Super Moderator Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Arizona, USA Posts: 1,053	Overall not a bad design, but... Couple things to note: The flash piece (if you keep it) needs a general frame rate increase, but pause the animation long enough for someone to read the text! It goes by way to quick. Perhaps add a thumbnail bar to provide a little user interaction, allowing them to select one of the [slides]? Be aware of the colors you choose! red is a warm color and blue is the exact opposite, a cold color. Both are also primary colors and they compete with each other. I would choose one or the other. This is a health care company, perhaps a blood red color is not the most appropriate? I like the crystal-like design of the background, try using light grey tones instead. This would put more emphasis on the color/content area of the website. As it stand the bg is a little distracting, needs toning down. Good luck. __________________ John Darling Graphic / Web Designer SmarterTools Inc. (877) 357-6278 www.smartertools.com

05-20-2009, 09:09 PM	#6
orangecopper Gold Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: India Posts: 334	Thankyou all for the review...Sure i will make a note and impliment them. Yes, JD you are absolutley right with the color...and this is just due for the first review of the website..will add your inputs and make it look better...thanks for your advices with colors too... Best regards Joshu Thomas OrangeCopper.com __________________ Best Classifieds ads scripts Best web hosting companies 2011 Wordpress SEO

05-23-2009, 04:03 AM	#7
sclick New Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 8	All my thoughts, nicely stated above, by others, but I do like your site, generally. It's fresh, and I want to read your copy, so slow down the flash. Definitely a great start to a site with much potential. Good luck.

05-23-2009, 08:04 AM	#8
wachtn Silver Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 107	It looks good.

07-11-2009, 12:36 AM	#9
Elective Bronze Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 27	You've got some excellent work here, congrats.

07-21-2009, 01:42 AM	#10
remoteworkmate New Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 2	hi the site looks neat actually...although i'm not a big fan of red, its kinda loud color but overall it looks great... __________________ Outsource Link Building \| Virtual Employee For Just $3.95 per hour \| Outsource SEO

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