Review Again Plz

scroll · 07-25-2005, 04:48 PM

***ian*** · 07-25-2005, 09:38 PM

1. I dont quite like the text logo graphics effect.
2. The bright green text against that background does not look very professional.
3. The font for the copyright notice should probably be the same as for the main text.
4. uneccessary empty space towards the bottom of the page.

RAJO · 08-22-2005, 10:40 AM

in simple word: " DESIGN A LAYOUT"

AuraDesign · 08-28-2005, 12:29 AM

Wowsers....ever heard of adding a positive to a negative? People like being critiqued but come on, you're putting youselves on pedestals. When someone asks for guidance- help them, don't slate them.
Me thinks you guys have been on this forum way to long...

StephanieCordray · 08-28-2005, 12:38 AM

First website i had critiqued got worse comments... I swallowed my pride and learned from it. However, if i post on a review request i do try to find some positives to add to the negatives.

***ian*** · 08-28-2005, 03:09 AM

Well people are looking for suggestions for improvement, some may be looking for a pat on the back and to be told their site is wonderful. I dont see anything wrong with constructive criticism, which is different to "I think your site is crap" As long as people go into a little detail, I dont think there is anything wrong with that, and can help people to do better.

***ian*** · 08-28-2005, 03:18 AM

Having just said that, I will take what you said into consideration. I dont do that in real life when helping someone, I try and add some positive reinforcement along with the suggestions for improvement. Just that when I type a lot of messages, is usually in the morning when I am in a hurry to get to work.

SiteExpress · 08-29-2005, 09:23 AM

I think you might be able to pull off the color combinations ok, but check your grammer and punctuation in your text. If you want to be considered professional, start with the basics. There is not a lot I can comment on since I cannot get most of the links to work.

silverpenny · 08-29-2005, 10:31 PM

I've found that the use of comic sans text usually generates an unprofessional feel to a website. Maybe you could experiment with some other fonts? Possibly the same font used in the navigation tabs at the top?

07-25-2005, 04:48 PM	#1 (permalink)
scroll New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hull East Yorkshire England Posts: 14	Review Again Plz www.wrightoptions.co.uk made changes

07-25-2005, 09:38 PM	#2 (permalink)
*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 1,650	1. I dont quite like the text logo graphics effect. 2. The bright green text against that background does not look very professional. 3. The font for the copyright notice should probably be the same as for the main text. 4. uneccessary empty space towards the bottom of the page. __________________ Computer Forum

08-22-2005, 10:40 AM	#3 (permalink)
RAJO Silver Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 136	in simple word: " DESIGN A LAYOUT" __________________ Thank You GAG-IS WEB SITE Design

08-28-2005, 12:29 AM	#4 (permalink)
AuraDesign New Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 14	wowsers! Wowsers....ever heard of adding a positive to a negative? People like being critiqued but come on, you're putting youselves on pedestals. When someone asks for guidance- help them, don't slate them. Me thinks you guys have been on this forum way to long...

08-28-2005, 03:09 AM	#6 (permalink)
*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 1,650	Well people are looking for suggestions for improvement, some may be looking for a pat on the back and to be told their site is wonderful. I dont see anything wrong with constructive criticism, which is different to "I think your site is crap" As long as people go into a little detail, I dont think there is anything wrong with that, and can help people to do better. __________________ Computer Forum

08-28-2005, 12:38 AM	#5 (permalink)
StephanieCordray Diamond Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Nashville TN Posts: 1,017	First website i had critiqued got worse comments... I swallowed my pride and learned from it. However, if i post on a review request i do try to find some positives to add to the negatives.

08-28-2005, 03:18 AM	#7 (permalink)
*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 1,650	Having just said that, I will take what you said into consideration. I dont do that in real life when helping someone, I try and add some positive reinforcement along with the suggestions for improvement. Just that when I type a lot of messages, is usually in the morning when I am in a hurry to get to work. __________________ Computer Forum

08-29-2005, 09:23 AM	#8 (permalink)
SiteExpress Gold Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 280	I think you might be able to pull off the color combinations ok, but check your grammer and punctuation in your text. If you want to be considered professional, start with the basics. There is not a lot I can comment on since I cannot get most of the links to work. __________________ Blog - Directory

08-29-2005, 10:31 PM	#9 (permalink)
silverpenny New Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 4	I've found that the use of comic sans text usually generates an unprofessional feel to a website. Maybe you could experiment with some other fonts? Possibly the same font used in the navigation tabs at the top?

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