Home Page review

doyle369 · 10-15-2008, 11:50 AM

Hi

Could you review my home page please?

http://www.willdoyle.co.uk

Its not quite finished..

Im sure if all the content sounds good...

what you think?

Im not that good at writing.

thanks

voodish · 10-15-2008, 12:35 PM

Hi Will - So far so good, I like it,

Although, I'm wondering why half of it is using tables and rest CSS, the code shows you know how to use CSS for layout but chose a tables to wrap certain elements..?

It's going to be very nice, keep slogging away!

rarepearldesign · 10-15-2008, 01:41 PM

Its very clean and I like that, but one complaint is when you highlight the menu items the color or the text remains white over those bright colors and are impossible to see.

I suggest making the text change color when the menu item background color changes, maybe inverse it. When a menu item is selected, have the text the color of the menu item when its not selected.

adamblan · 10-15-2008, 10:51 PM

I agree with both previous comments ::

#menu a:visited {needs work}

Looks good overall; keep it up!

CT-Matt · 10-16-2008, 01:55 AM

I absolutely love the clean, simple layout; and you made the colors work nicely with it.

Perfect that navigation, and you'll have quite an eye-catching site. Great work!

wetgravy · 10-16-2008, 02:55 AM

looks good. clean, easy to navigate. good job.

3dmagicaldesign · 10-22-2008, 02:46 PM

Since you will offer web design, have you consider to setup an online portfolio and testimonials, so the people that logs into your website can review your work?

10-15-2008, 11:50 AM	#1
doyle369 New Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 22	Home Page review Hi Could you review my home page please? http://www.willdoyle.co.uk Its not quite finished.. Im sure if all the content sounds good... what you think? Im not that good at writing. thanks

10-15-2008, 12:35 PM	#2
voodish Silver Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: North Wales, UK Posts: 115	Hi Will - So far so good, I like it, Although, I'm wondering why half of it is using tables and rest CSS, the code shows you know how to use CSS for layout but chose a tables to wrap certain elements..? It's going to be very nice, keep slogging away! __________________ Voodish Creative Director Web Design Portfolio Web Development Articles

10-15-2008, 01:41 PM	#3
rarepearldesign Bronze Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 72	Its very clean and I like that, but one complaint is when you highlight the menu items the color or the text remains white over those bright colors and are impossible to see. I suggest making the text change color when the menu item background color changes, maybe inverse it. When a menu item is selected, have the text the color of the menu item when its not selected. __________________ Rare Pearl Design - Web Design, Custom Programming, SEO, Marketing, and Hosting

10-15-2008, 10:51 PM	#4
adamblan Silver Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Lake Tahoe Posts: 235	I agree with both previous comments :: #menu a:visited {needs work} Looks good overall; keep it up! __________________ <ablank.us>

10-16-2008, 01:55 AM	#5
CT-Matt New Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 16	I absolutely love the clean, simple layout; and you made the colors work nicely with it. Perfect that navigation, and you'll have quite an eye-catching site. Great work! __________________ CTMedia Studios - Small Business Web Design

10-16-2008, 02:55 AM	#6
wetgravy Silver Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 176	looks good. clean, easy to navigate. good job.

10-22-2008, 02:46 PM	#7
3dmagicaldesign Gold Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 268	Since you will offer web design, have you consider to setup an online portfolio and testimonials, so the people that logs into your website can review your work? __________________ 3D MAGICAL DESIGNS Custom Web Designs \| 3D Architectural Renderings - Follow me on Twitter

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