Looking for critique

dpb5 · 05-05-2005, 01:55 AM

Please review my new website and give me any and all criticisms.

TIA!

http://www.kwikeverything.com

StephanieCordray · 05-05-2005, 04:26 AM

The turtles are cute but I don't like the 'new' animation.

I think the text should be brought in towards the center. It's all short paragraphs and strung out across the page from margin to margin makes it look a little bare. Other than that there's not a lot to say because it looks very much still under construction.

***ian*** · 05-05-2005, 04:48 AM

looks like too much stuff on the page and no idea what the site is meant to be about.
I do like the turtles though and as stephanie said it would probably look better centred.

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dpb5 New Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1	Looking for critique Please review my new website and give me any and all criticisms. TIA! http://www.kwikeverything.com Last edited by dpb5; 05-05-2005 at 02:07 AM. Reason: wrong link

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*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 1,684	looks like too much stuff on the page and no idea what the site is meant to be about. I do like the turtles though and as stephanie said it would probably look better centred. __________________ Computer Forum

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05-05-2005, 04:26 AM	#2 (permalink)
StephanieCordray Diamond Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Nashville TN Posts: 1,017	The turtles are cute but I don't like the 'new' animation. I think the text should be brought in towards the center. It's all short paragraphs and strung out across the page from margin to margin makes it look a little bare. Other than that there's not a lot to say because it looks very much still under construction.