Website Visual

jwalker80 · 06-07-2007, 07:27 PM

hey,

anyone got any constructive criticism for my visual for this site.

The company is an organisation that allows people to travel and trek in different countries and raise money for charities

"The whole idea is to make life less stressful, for people to have fun and while having fun raising money for Irish Charities and Community projects."

The content area will be styled by a CMS

http://www.acara.ie/visual.jpg

***ian*** · 06-11-2007, 07:24 AM

I would use a bigger font text for the main text. Other than that, it looks ok.

yoshi8 · 06-14-2007, 04:10 PM

Made me feel a little dizzy with all those curves

Main issue I think is your body text line length is too long.

06-07-2007, 07:27 PM	#1 (permalink)
jwalker80 New Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 8	Website Visual hey, anyone got any constructive criticism for my visual for this site. The company is an organisation that allows people to travel and trek in different countries and raise money for charities "The whole idea is to make life less stressful, for people to have fun and while having fun raising money for Irish Charities and Community projects." The content area will be styled by a CMS http://www.acara.ie/visual.jpg

06-11-2007, 07:24 AM	#2 (permalink)
*ian* Administrator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 1,684	I would use a bigger font text for the main text. Other than that, it looks ok. __________________ Computer Forum

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06-14-2007, 04:10 PM	#3 (permalink)
yoshi8 Bronze Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 37	Made me feel a little dizzy with all those curves Main issue I think is your body text line length is too long.