critique my logo design?

che09 · 07-21-2012, 02:50 AM

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I read the title as Unit Exercises Review, not sure about anyone else. I presume it's supposed to read Unit Review Exercises?

I need to take a second look to it before realizing that you have a point. It reads that way.

Nonetheless, Christ suggestion on Polycell but make sure you give a original touch of it!

Discovermypath · 07-22-2012, 01:33 AM

Thanks for the input about the way it reads. It is meant to be Unit Review Exercises, hence the UREstudy.com. I have some work to do with it. For now I have went back to the drawing board on the Logo and have focused on other aspects of the site.

My original thought about the position of the individual words was to stagger them a little bit so that they don't read straight across. I figured my target audience (Air Force personnel) would be able to read it just fine because they know exactly what URE's are.

I appreciate all the comments.

Sllen Scott · 07-23-2012, 05:04 AM

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Originally Posted by Discovermypath

Thanks for the input about the way it reads. It is meant to be Unit Review Exercises, hence the UREstudy.com. I have some work to do with it. For now I have went back to the drawing board on the Logo and have focused on other aspects of the site.

My original thought about the position of the individual words was to stagger them a little bit so that they don't read straight across. I figured my target audience (Air Force personnel) would be able to read it just fine because they know exactly what URE's are.

I appreciate all the comments.

hmm, you could still use that idea. try moving the word Exercise a bit down towards the middle of Unit and Review and it will probably fix that one.

HireLogo · 07-31-2012, 08:42 PM

Review seems "stretched" to me. remove urestudy.com keep exercises same weight(change height to "unit" height), but try combining that creatively with the "t" of unit. My point is. Play around with arrangement and take out unnecessary if not needed.

ilovedesign · 08-10-2012, 02:48 AM

Keep us posted on the progress, Discovermypath! Sometimes to help me get ideas flowing I take a sketchbook and go for a walk in the woods. I’m able to clear my head, remove any distractions, and the woods are inspiring to me.

bdclippingpath · 08-29-2012, 08:09 AM

Not so bad to look but there is no creativity.

Yahoostore · 09-15-2012, 06:48 AM

Many mistakes people make the first time is just thinking about making a cool image without considering how it will be used. I'd suggest the following:-

1-Be careful of overused elements. In your example you use the dot people. I'd be careful because it's so commonly used that it does come off clipart-ish even if you've drawn it yourself.

2-Always start off in black/white. Any effective logo should work well in b/w, grayscale and full color.

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HireLogo Bronze Member Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 47	Review seems "stretched" to me. remove urestudy.com keep exercises same weight(change height to "unit" height), but try combining that creatively with the "t" of unit. My point is. Play around with arrangement and take out unnecessary if not needed. __________________ Small Business Logo Design Buy Logo Design

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ilovedesign New Member Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 14	Keep us posted on the progress, Discovermypath! Sometimes to help me get ideas flowing I take a sketchbook and go for a walk in the woods. I’m able to clear my head, remove any distractions, and the woods are inspiring to me. __________________ Get UNIQUE brochure ideas and low PRICE booklets here!

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07-22-2012, 01:33 AM	#12
Discovermypath New Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 14	Thanks for the input about the way it reads. It is meant to be Unit Review Exercises, hence the UREstudy.com. I have some work to do with it. For now I have went back to the drawing board on the Logo and have focused on other aspects of the site. My original thought about the position of the individual words was to stagger them a little bit so that they don't read straight across. I figured my target audience (Air Force personnel) would be able to read it just fine because they know exactly what URE's are. I appreciate all the comments.

09-15-2012, 06:48 AM	#17
Yahoostore New Member Join Date: Sep 2012 Location: India Posts: 1	Many mistakes people make the first time is just thinking about making a cool image without considering how it will be used. I'd suggest the following:- 1-Be careful of overused elements. In your example you use the dot people. I'd be careful because it's so commonly used that it does come off clipart-ish even if you've drawn it yourself. 2-Always start off in black/white. Any effective logo should work well in b/w, grayscale and full color. Yahoo Store India