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Old 07-21-2011, 02:41 PM   #1
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Hello everybody,

Since I am a novice in major Web Design work, your comments and advice would be of great help.

Please take a look at http://www.arobs.com and let me know your thoughts.

I am currently making changes to the layout based on feedback from colleagues and friends, but they are not specialists in the field. I won't tell you what they complained about to prevent any bias.

Feel tear everything apart (graphics, layout, navigation, menu structure, content, metatags).

Thanks a lot.

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Old 07-21-2011, 07:19 PM   #2
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The logo is a very poor quality image. Try saving it as png instead of jpg.

Generally the site has too much content without any particular thing standing out. It's best to concentrate the user's gaze on what you want them to be looking at.
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Old 07-21-2011, 09:59 PM   #3
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The logo is a very poor quality image. Try saving it as png instead of jpg.

Generally the site has too much content without any particular thing standing out. It's best to concentrate the user's gaze on what you want them to be looking at.
I agree, the logo is very blurry and gives the site a cheap look. Not that it's cheap, seems very well thought out and great work.

If I were to change anything, you should minimize the look of the front page and create a bold statement, as I didn't know where to look and wasn't sure what the site was about off the first look.
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Old 07-22-2011, 02:35 AM   #4
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looks like a link farm. i'd go there, then leave.

if you want navigation, then have navigation, but the whole damn page is navigation!

whats it about? hard to tell, no real key messages.
no real design either, it jumps all over the place.
I dont like it.
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needs some line spacing

use your whitespace more effectively.
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Thanks a lot.

Negative comments are especially welcome.

Navigation and focus are the main things we are working on. Please take a look at the new layout and let me know what you think.



Cheers.

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